tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7276721339872152538.post6935088899261667415..comments2016-11-22T11:59:18.028+13:00Comments on Raj @ Elm Park School: Camp MERCclassof2016http://www.blogger.com/profile/08905823353874584112noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7276721339872152538.post-59982601591673567602016-11-22T11:55:22.394+13:002016-11-22T11:55:22.394+13:00Well tried Raj. You have attempted to improve you...Well tried Raj. You have attempted to improve your recount writing by using a good hook as well as trying to use past tense.Mrs Danehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16875067462688171942noreply@blogger.com